The Unmasking of Oz: The Road to Revelation — book cover

A novel by Marty Gool

The Unmasking of OzThe Road to Revelation

There is no place like Oz.

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Chapter 11: The City Requires a Lens

The road ended at a gate.

The gate was small.

A city the size of a horizon had a gate the size of a kitchen door, and Dora understood before she crossed it that small gates were not modesty. Small gates sorted.

A guard waited beside it in a green coat trimmed with gold. He carried no rifle. He carried a wooden box on a strap and a clipboard tucked under one arm. His mustache had been combed. His smile had been issued.

“Pilgrims,” he said.

“Yes.”

“From?”

“The Dust District.”

He wrote without looking down.

He opened the box.

Inside lay green disks in velvet pockets, thin as a fingernail, polished, and when he lifted one between two fingers it caught the daylight and held it the way the screen at the platform had held Silas Brace's clean shirt before the cut to the seal.

“For your protection,” he said.

He did not say from what.

In Oz, protection was always offered before the danger was named, because the offering created the danger in the mind of the one receiving it. A citizen who was protected had already agreed there was something to be protected from. The agreement came first. The threat could be supplied later.

Dora looked at the disk.

“What does it do?”

“It adjusts the light.”

“The light?”

“The light of the city is very strong. Unprotected eyes have been known to weep.”

He said weep as if weeping were the danger.

He did not say the city was the danger.

He did not have to.

“Do we have to wear them?”

“No. You may also remain outside the gate.”

He smiled while he said it.

That was Oz too. The choice the city offered and the choice a person would have made were not the same choice, and the city was honest about which one it provided.

The Straw Man's torn sleeve stirred against his chest. The Tin Man's hand pressed the rusted seam where the false heart had bitten him. The Lion stood with dried blood beneath his mane. Toto pressed against Dora's ankle and made no sound.

The guard's pen moved across the clipboard.

The lens was already counting them.

Dora took it.

The Straw Man took his. The Tin Man took his. The Lion took his.

Toto was not offered one.

Animals, unregistered.

The category had its uses.

“For yourself first,” the guard said.

Dora closed her left eye.

She placed the lens over her right.

The city arrived.

Fountains lifted at every corner, white arcs falling into stone basins carved with vines. Banners ran from every tower in green and gold, rippling in a wind assigned to them. Music came from nowhere, strings and bells and voices lifted in something built to make the body lean toward the sound. Citizens walked in green that shone faintly from being cared for. Children ran among them.

The children were laughing.

Not the careful laughter of the bypassed village. Not the laughter behind hands. Laughter that came up from the chest and out into the air without checking the ceiling first.

Dora's throat closed.

She had not seen children laugh like that since before she could remember, and her body recognized the laughter before her mind could decide what to do with it. Her shoulders softened. Her wrist stopped hurting where the ribbon had bitten her.

That was the first work of the lens.

It comforted before it was questioned.

It gave a body its rest before that body could ask what the rest had cost.

About the Book

A dystopian retelling of The Wizard of Oz through the lens of the book of Revelation.

In the Dust District, the people line up each morning beneath broadcast towers for water, seed, debt notices, and the Wizard's blessing. The soil cracks under their feet. The screens call the land prosperous. The Wizard's face fills the sky and tells the people that hunger is holy and that there is no place like Oz.

Then thirteen-year-old Dora Gale sees the broadcast skip. For half a second, the face in the sky pixelates — and the lie becomes visible.

What follows is a journey through everything the regime has taught its people to call God. A road that knows their names. A Scarecrow punished for asking why. A Tin Man whose grief was called inefficiency. A Lion whose pulpit was bolted to a broadcast stand. A Witch who turns out to have been a writer with ink-stained hands. A Wizard who turns out to be a small frightened man behind a curtain. A Beast beneath the floor of the city with eight mouths, and a figure on a white horse who comes not to destroy but to reveal.

This is a parable about empire and its catechesis, about the cross as unveiling rather than transaction, about the Lamb who has been present in every cut the regime made. It is a book for readers who have asked whether God is punishing them, and who suspect the God they were taught to fear is not the God who is actually here.

"The curtain did not fall because God had left us. The curtain fell because God had been revealed."

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